tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post6379010131244786845..comments2024-03-21T21:01:57.313-07:00Comments on Lock and load, brides of Christ: The third draft.Elinorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15233219453840471777noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-28437142801679672122008-07-11T05:29:00.000-07:002008-07-11T05:29:00.000-07:00Ooh, nice one Rach! So essential. I'll write that ...Ooh, nice one Rach! So essential. I'll write that on my wall.Elinorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233219453840471777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-83884975441741704612008-07-10T15:13:00.000-07:002008-07-10T15:13:00.000-07:00OK. Mine's "remember what the scene's there for." ...OK. Mine's "remember what the scene's there for." If it isn't telling anything or you've said it already in another scene then it is just padding.Rachael Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14222766940882747671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-14793145864642657552008-07-07T13:44:00.000-07:002008-07-07T13:44:00.000-07:00Alright alright, we didn't go to SWF this year and...Alright alright, we didn't go to SWF this year and you did!<BR/><BR/>Even so, Tony Jordan rules.Elinorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233219453840471777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-48507530600946500632008-07-07T08:25:00.000-07:002008-07-07T08:25:00.000-07:00"keep cutting words out of dialogue as long as it ...<I>"keep cutting words out of dialogue as long as it continues to make sense"</I><BR/><BR/>...that would be the lad himself... *fanfare please* ...Tony Jordan!<BR/><BR/>I thank you! ;)Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01957384209312857833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-48609340965998341682008-07-07T06:10:00.000-07:002008-07-07T06:10:00.000-07:00Lucy - coffee or death, tough call...Lad - excelle...Lucy - coffee or death, tough call...<BR/><BR/>Lad - excellent dialogue tip!Elinorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15233219453840471777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-28224379216015676432008-07-07T05:46:00.000-07:002008-07-07T05:46:00.000-07:00Coffee is good but, definitely, one of the most us...Coffee is good but, definitely, one of the most useful things you can know: Enter as late as possible, get out as early as possible.<BR/><BR/>And the hint about dialogue which was mentioned at SWF, I forget by who, but is basically "keep cutting words out of dialogue as long as it continues to make sense".Adaddinsanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10577587188266580561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-664673615329384801.post-66949555389396488802008-07-07T05:21:00.000-07:002008-07-07T05:21:00.000-07:00make coffee or diemake coffee or dieLucy Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15576008511353143019noreply@blogger.com