Why doesn't she just use INTERCUT? Looks like this: ---------------------- INTERCUT:
INT. LIVING ROOM/BEDROOM - DAY
Lucy types on her laptop, sends an email.
LUCY Tell her to use intercut.
Elinor reclines on her large waterbed, cocktail in hand, her feet rubbed by a gorgeous naked man.
ELINOR I haven't got time to read my emails, can't you see the stud at my feet?
(END OF INTERCUT) ---------------------------- Anything else in a spec will smell of DIRECTING FROM THE PAGE since it's up to the prodco to decide how it's gonna look; it's Silvia's job to tell the story.
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INTERCUT:
INT. LIVING ROOM/BEDROOM - DAY
Lucy types on her laptop, sends an email.
LUCY
Tell her to use intercut.
Elinor reclines on her large waterbed, cocktail in hand, her feet rubbed by a gorgeous naked man.
ELINOR
I haven't got time to read my emails, can't you see the stud at my feet?
(END OF INTERCUT)
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Anything else in a spec will smell of DIRECTING FROM THE PAGE since it's up to the prodco to decide how it's gonna look; it's Silvia's job to tell the story.
Hope that helps!
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